Social medias,and traffic cameras are both examples of technology that can not only be invasive but can control peoples lives. Score from your peers: I would love you to tell me where they are. However, the sentence structure was a little stilted. Thanks for your opinion Sean. Notify me of followup comments via e-mail. I also know that young adult literature is not for me.
Does the essay show a deep understanding of some aspect of the work or of a pattern that one can see in the work? Each avatar is anonymous giving people the freedom to say what they wish without danger. To find out more, including how to control cookies, see here: I very much enjoyed discussing books with people. Your email address will not be published. Are the sentences grammatically correct? Are there concrete details from the text that support the argument and that we come to understand more powerfully because of the argument?
You are commenting using your Google account. All except for the last sentence, which is IMHO a nonsensical attempt to give the novel a twist.
May be, I would read more about the implications of the link between life and virtual game. Marcus Yallow is just a young kid who was caught in the wrong place at the wrong time, or so you would think. Your email address will not be published. Notify me of followup comments via essau. But them I am not a young adult.
I contributed to that thread: Are we in an ARG. Thanks for your opinion Sean. Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Wish the conclusion was sound or there was no question on the end, could have given you a three.
You are commenting using your Facebook account. Please write an essay that aims to enrich the reading of a fellow student who is both intelligent and attentive to the readings and to the course. FORM here refers to matters of grammar, usage, and structure. I should have thought that one out better. The first example are cameras. Words used properly and arguments are laid out clearly.
Please indicate in words your judgment of the FORM of the essay you have just read. Is the exposition and argument laid out clearly? I would love you to tell me where they are.
Little Brother Essay by Aaron Tempel
You brogher commenting using your Twitter account. Technology and privacy go hand in hand. An ideal response would note one aspect of Content that the writer does well and would profit by continuing and one aspect of Content that the writer would profit by improving in ways you make clear.
The grammar was appropriate for the assignment and the word usage was difficult to follow. Are the sentences grammatically correct?
In the end I did it very quickly based on games. Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here Here is the essay that I submitted which received ccory 4.
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However, the sentence structure was a little stilted. Most grades should be 2. Marcus uses his avatar to hold a press conference whilst still remaining anonymous and also safe from physical attack.
Social medias,and traffic cameras are both examples of technology that can not only be invasive but can control peoples lives. It would have been within the extreme nature of the game and of the fiction within the book.
Email required Address never made public. Marcus is actually a hacker that got stuck in a bombing and was wrongly accused of being a terrorist, just because he wanted to keep his information private.
The last book for this course was a bit of a disappointment for me.